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Who spoke and how — said, whispered; keep invisible unless rhythm needs help.
Who spoke and how — said, whispered; keep invisible unless rhythm needs help. Dialogue craft lives in subtext, rhythm, and idiolect — not only in clever lines.
As a technique, it is a deliberate move — judge it by effect in context, not by blanket ban.
In revision, ask whether the move earns its place in this scene — techniques work when they change reader understanding or feeling.
Why it matters
Attribution targets how speech and voice work — common flat-dialogue fixes start with naming the problem.
Common pitfalls
Instead of naming the move, dramatize it: show the choice that makes attribution visible on the page.