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Flashy speech tags (exclaimed, opined) that draw attention from the line.
Flashy speech tags (exclaimed, opined) that draw attention from the line. Dialogue craft lives in subtext, rhythm, and idiolect — not only in clever lines.
As a technique, it is a deliberate move — judge it by effect in context, not by blanket ban.
This term narrows the broader idea of **attribution** — keep parent and child roles distinct in outlines.
In revision, ask whether the move earns its place in this scene — techniques work when they change reader understanding or feeling.
Why it matters
Said-bookism targets how speech and voice work — common flat-dialogue fixes start with naming the problem.
Common pitfalls