Perception verbs that distance the reader (saw, felt, seemed). Trim when the image can stand alone.

Words that add distance (seemed, felt, noticed). Often trimmable. Prose craft operates at the sentence. Rhythm, image, and distance shape feel on every page.

As a technique, it is a deliberate move. Judge it by effect in context, not by blanket ban.

In revision, ask whether the move earns its place in this scene. Techniques work when they change reader understanding or feeling.

Why it matters

Filter word belongs to line-level craft. Manuscript Health Check and line edits often flag related patterns.

Common pitfalls

Trimming so aggressively that spatial grounding disappears.
Using filter word as a label without checking whether the page actually performs the job.
Letting filter word crowd out scene goal, conflict, or change at the end of the unit.

Example only

Instead of naming the move, dramatize it: show the choice that makes filter word visible on the page.

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Filter word

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filter verb

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Perception verbs that distance the reader (saw, felt, seemed). Trim when the image can stand alone.

Words that add distance (seemed, felt, noticed). Often trimmable. Prose craft operates at the sentence. Rhythm, image, and distance shape feel on every page.

As a technique, it is a deliberate move. Judge it by effect in context, not by blanket ban.

In revision, ask whether the move earns its place in this scene. Techniques work when they change reader understanding or feeling.

Why it matters

Filter word belongs to line-level craft. Manuscript Health Check and line edits often flag related patterns.

Common pitfalls

Trimming so aggressively that spatial grounding disappears.
Using filter word as a label without checking whether the page actually performs the job.
Letting filter word crowd out scene goal, conflict, or change at the end of the unit.

Example only

Instead of naming the move, dramatize it: show the choice that makes filter word visible on the page.