Abstraction ladder
Moving between concrete detail and abstract summary. Balance shapes clarity.
Glossaries · Tone & prose style
Showing vs telling, rhythm, and line-level craft.
Moving between concrete detail and abstract summary. Balance shapes clarity.
Repetition of a word or phrase at the start of successive clauses.
Giving human traits to non-human things. A tone choice, not always an error.
Omitting conjunctions between list items for speed or force.
Echoing a phrase or image for emphasis. Cousin to anaphora at line level.
Flat, generic prose with little sensory or rhythmic personality.