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Shifting POV within a scene without clear signal — often disorienting.
Shifting POV within a scene without clear signal — often disorienting. POV choices are contracts about knowledge and voice — break them deliberately, not accidentally.
As a technique, it is a deliberate move — judge it by effect in context, not by blanket ban.
This term narrows the broader idea of **point of view** — keep parent and child roles distinct in outlines.
In revision, ask whether the move earns its place in this scene — techniques work when they change reader understanding or feeling.
Why it matters
Head hopping clarifies narration choices that affect empathy, irony, and what readers can know when.
Common pitfalls