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Prose mimicking the flow of thought — high immersion, high clarity cost.
Prose mimicking the flow of thought — high immersion, high clarity cost. POV choices are contracts about knowledge and voice — break them deliberately, not accidentally.
As a technique, it is a deliberate move — judge it by effect in context, not by blanket ban.
In revision, ask whether the move earns its place in this scene — techniques work when they change reader understanding or feeling.
Why it matters
Stream of consciousness clarifies narration choices that affect empathy, irony, and what readers can know when.
Common pitfalls